Tuesday, December 14, 2010

Last Blog Post

Over this semester I have grown a lot as a writer. I was able to be more creative and original with the writing that I do. I also was able to improve my research skills. I became more comfortable with the svsu library databases as well. Additionally, I became more comfortable with sharing my work with others. I am now more confident with my writing because of that. Overall, I feel that this class has helped me improve in several ways as a writer.

Monday, December 6, 2010

Final draft of revision piece

I am very happy with the final draft of my revision piece. I feel like I did a good job revising an essay into something that I could turn in as a final copy. I think that I chose a good piece to work with. The major change that I made was turning the essay into a narrative. I rewrote the essay in the form of a story to depict my feelings and actions. Overall, I am happy with my final draft of my revision piece and excited to see what grade I got on it.