Monday, September 27, 2010
Revisions
Currently I am in the process of writing an argumentative paper in the form of a letter regarding the reliability of Wikipedia. After doing the peer reviews in class and listening to other papers being critiqued out loud I realize what changes that I must make to my paper. I need to develop some of my ideas more clearly and explain the "why" aspect of each paragraph. Also, after hearing several other papers, I think that I need to focus more on the letter aspect of my paper.This is the most difficult part for me. I know what I want to say, but sometimes it is hard to convey that in the form of a letter to someone. Overall, I feel that revising my paper is going pretty well, however I am interested to see what others think of my changes and how well they work.
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This seems to be the same thing that happened to me. It is hard for me to realize my mistakes until others address their own mistakes. This gives me ideas on how to change my letter. It appears that you have a good idea on what aspects of the paper you need to work on! Good luck, hopefully with both get an A! (:
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