Sunday, October 24, 2010
Revisions to Research Paper
I am currently writing a research paper regarding how much music of the 1960s has influenced today's music. An important revision that I am making to my draft is adding more examples of individual artists. I want to compare certain artists from the 60s to artists today. My first draft was just a general overview of influences with a few references to certain people or bands. However, I feel that if I elaborate more on individuals it will help the argument of my paper.
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Your topic is really interesting! I wouldn't have thought of researching that! I agree, elaborate on individuals will help your paper and "speak" more to the readers. I wish you luck on your paper!
ReplyDeleteThanks, the paper turned out really well. I just got the grade back for it a couple of days ago and did good on it. I think that this change helped a lot.
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