Sunday, November 28, 2010
Revision Piece
For my revision piece I chose to write a descriptive story. I have a ridiculous fear of airplanes, so I wrote about the first time that I ever flew on an airplane. I chose to do this piece because it was the most interesting of all of my in class writings. It began as just a paragraph on my biggest fear, and I revised it so it sounded more like a story. I like writing descriptive accounts of things that I have actually experienced so I believe that I will be able to do well on this. I feel that I can to do a lot with this piece and I am excited to continue to revise it.
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I too am writing a story. My story originated from a class writing. Its going to be about Little Red Riding Hood. On a side note, you should not be afraid of airplanes. I read somewhere that driving in cars is more dangerous than flying in airplanes. Of course, you can survive a car crash...
ReplyDeleteI also like to write from personal experience. My project was based on my first semester at Delta. I enjoy conveying my thoughts and experience in writing rather then working on a research paper or response essay. It's more fun and personal.
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