Monday, December 6, 2010
Final draft of revision piece
I am very happy with the final draft of my revision piece. I feel like I did a good job revising an essay into something that I could turn in as a final copy. I think that I chose a good piece to work with. The major change that I made was turning the essay into a narrative. I rewrote the essay in the form of a story to depict my feelings and actions. Overall, I am happy with my final draft of my revision piece and excited to see what grade I got on it.
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I definately can relate to the major change. I had to do the same thing with my revision piece. I turned my prompt into a letter to my sister, so that i can put my feelings into my writing.
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